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You throw your bag to some random place in your messy room. "God I hate gym." You say to yourself. Your sister, (random name), is at her play rehearsal and your mom won't be home until late tonight. When you look around the room something catches your eye. The picture with it's (f/c) frame. The picture of your forth grade class. You sigh remembering that year

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"Bye mom!" you close the car door behind you. You were late on your very first day! Well at least you can blame it on your mom living in (town) and you going to school two towns away. You quickly walk into the brick building that is school, round the corner, and  walk into the forth grade classroom, late. "(y/n), nice of you to join us" your teacher said. "Sorry I'm late" you quickly sat down at your seat. When you got yourself settled you began looking at your classmates. Francis was flirting with Arthur,  Antonio was talking to Livino, probably about tomatoes. Then you saw Alfred staring at you with his big blue eyes and that adorable cow lick. He smiled at you and you smiled back. Ever since kindergarden you and Alfred had a special connection, he was just the first one to realize. Which was in 1st grade when he gave a peck on the cheek after school for about a month. You hadn't really had an interest in him until this year. You use to like Gilbert but he was to interested in Elizaveta that he didn't even see you anymore.

Present

You sigh and look at Alfred in the picture some more. You missed him terribly. You hadn't seen him in 3 years.

Flashback

You knew it was your last year at (random school name). Your parents had told you in 3rd grade that they were getting a divorce. You had a choice between staying at (random school name) for forth grade or going straight to (town name) and living with your mom. Of coarse you decided to be with your friends for another year. On the last day day you had said to yourself "(y/n), you will confess your love." But you didn't and on the bud ride home, you cried. Realizing that you would probably never see Alfred again.

Present

You closed your eyes and laid down on your bed, letting a tear escape your (e/c) eyes. You never saw Alfred again.....
  • Mood: Tearful
  • Listening to: River
  • Reading: What I'm writing
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:iconpikachu5091:
Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
No!!!! You can't end it like this! I don't accept it!! It's so sad!!! Please continue it! Just not this!
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
How am I suppose to add on to it? That's how the story goes. I'm sorry it's sad, I lived it, I know it's sad.
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Jenn0607 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
*cries* plz make another chapter! It can't end sad! I reject this! (But i do love it. :)
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm sorry that's how the story ends.
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MissDarkCeltic18 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Same thing happened to me. It sucks knowing that I still think about him and get the butterflies at my stomach from that. *Last time I saw him was eighth grade and is now attending college in January* T.T
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
sorry to hear that
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:iconmissdarkceltic18:
MissDarkCeltic18 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
It's okay...
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
.....
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TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG

Something just like this happened to me! There was this kid in my class and for the first couple years I didnt notice him. In fouth grade though he came back (because his dad was in the military and they had moved away the previous year) and for some reason I began to like him. Alot. But all the girls liked him and I was rly shy so I never told him how felt. He moved and I haunt seen him since...part of the reason I didnt tell him was because the last guy I told died...:(

I am now extremely depressed
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
eak! the person died!
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:iconthetalkingtomato:
TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah...I don't think I'll ever get a boyfriend because every time they ask me out im gonna have nervous break-down and start crying telling them I don't want them to die... :(
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
oh..... well i hope they don't die. I have never had a boyfriend. Only kid crushes.
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:iconthetalkingtomato:
TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know how you feel...
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ja......
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:iconthetalkingtomato:
TheTalkingTomato Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:(
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
this has to continue!
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
How? Thats how the true story ends.
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
really whoa. It's so beautiful and sad.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful?
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah! It was a well written piece that was very emotional.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ok, if you say so.
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:iconchibimonstersproi:
ChibimonstersproI Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
U need to continue this I hate sad endings D:
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm sorry. But thats all that happens. I mean this was a real expeirience of mine.
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:iconchibimonstersproi:
ChibimonstersproI Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Ooooo i am soo sorry I didn't realise plz forgive me
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you don't need to be sorry. I've been told by a number of peopel that I need to continue it. I don't think I will though.
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ChibimonstersproI Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
well its entirly ur oppinion :iconohyouplz:
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
woah thats creepy
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:iconchibimonstersproi:
ChibimonstersproI Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
srry if that creeped u out i love using that icon for no reason at all
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
its fine it was funny but surprising. My favorite is :iconsmexycanadaplz:
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
really same here I'm so sorry.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You don't have to be sorry
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:iconyuki-the-trickster:
Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
oh ok but that happened to me too. It was kind sad at first but then I got over it.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i don't think i'll ever get over this...
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:iconlifealwaysgoeson:
lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm trembling. Literally.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Really?
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:iconlifealwaysgoeson:
lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. And now I'm hearing things. The weirdest things happen to me when I'm sick.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'm sorry to hear that your sick
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:iconlifealwaysgoeson:
lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah it's okay. I feel a lot better now.
Thanks for caring though.
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
good
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Xx-SunsetSkies-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For those who cried here is an alternate ending

Just then there was a knock on your door. Your eyes lightened and your door opened to reveal...

Your mom.


The end!
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ChaoticPuffins Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dangit woman!
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:iconxx-sunsetskies-xx:
Xx-SunsetSkies-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol XD
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:iconchaoticpuffins:
ChaoticPuffins Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hah!
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Nice. You cried?
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:iconxx-sunsetskies-xx:
Xx-SunsetSkies-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nah XD It was very sad though
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Y i know. I didn't want it to be so sad but thats how it came out, it happened that way.
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:iconxx-sunsetskies-xx:
Xx-SunsetSkies-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand, some stories are best left with a sad ending
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ya. Only I hope in real life it dosen't happen like that.
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:iconxx-sunsetskies-xx:
Xx-SunsetSkies-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ya
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:iconexi1200:
Exi1200 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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